Monday, November 6, 2017

Persuasive writing by Max

No pests:


Ms Rhodes imagine endemic bird,s everywhere you go it would be amazing. You could go outside and lay in the middle of long grass and listen to the piwakawaka and the  impressive squawk of the kaka and the sweet chirp off the hihi.when you wake up you can listen to bird,s singing song,s.


Room 14 have learnt how to set a  trap safely so hopefully no one will get there finger;s cut off so come help the bird,s by killing rats and mice and predators. So it would be nice to see lots of birds like kaka piwakawaka and the robin there's lots more birds to mention but there is so many it's practically impossible


Miss rhodes you  and room 14 can make brooklyn school have no pest and just have native and endemic birds everywhere so no pest just native and endemic birds like kiwi and tui!!!!!


Max

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