The Boat Trip by Max

Shh Shh Splash the salty waves hit the side of the boat and the cold breeze brushed in your face. Bss Bss Ahh the kids scream when the salty water hits them in the face. People were saying it's the best day of their life on and on. "More water more water" the kids chanted. "Whoooo" said Ruby when she got wet. "Whooo" everyone screamed when they got wet by a big wave. When the boat stopped people said "turn around". When we got out we were soaked.